Answer:
1. She played video games all day long without stopping. - c. Immature Writing
2. Without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long. - b. Mature Writing
3. For what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement. - a. Overuse of Thesaurus
Explanation:
Let's take a look at each sentence.
Sentence number 1 uses a very simple vocabulary. In a sense, there is nothing special about it. No vivid descriptions, no word choice to help us picture the actions or sense the feelings. Therefore, it is an example of immature writing.
Sentence 2 is the opposite of 1. It uses more complex and descriptive words. Instead of simply saying "she played video games", the author makes it an action really worth telling with "she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games." It sounds more exciting, and we can see her, the character, in action. Therefore, number 2 is an example of mature writing.
Finally, sentence 3 goes to an extreme when it comes to the use of complex or unusual words. It seems as if the author wanted to sound smart, so he/she exaggerated in the use of the Thesaurus. That, as a matter of fact, makes it much more difficult to comprehend the message being conveyed.
Answer:
She played video games all day long without stopping - Immature writing
Without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long - Mature Writing
or what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement - Overuse of the Thesaurus
Explanation:
She played video games all day long without stopping.
A) Immature Writing
Explanation: While this is a complete sentence, this is generally only accepted in casual sentences, and is not used for formal writings.
B) Mature Writing
Without ceasing, she gripped her controller in her hands and dominated her video games all day long.
Explanation: While this is not a casual writing, it doesn't overuse any "high-class" words that very few know. This is the right sentence to use in many stories or essays.
C) Overuse of the Thesaurus
For what had the quality of time interminable, she toiled merrily at her digital amusement.
Explanation: This sentence uses the Thesaurus too much, for many of the words used are not "every-day" words, and is most likely a "bigger" word found in the Thesaurus.
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Write a debate on education is better than money
Answer:
Education is anyday more important than money. But education is knowledge and through knowledge, we can rule over the whole world. Knowledge is wealth more important than money. Money can buy an object, but not the thought process of knowledge that went into creating that object.
Explanation:
what type of questions is "you shouldn't have done this to me?
Answer:
A direct question.
Explanation:
It honestly sounds like something someone who just got betrayed would say.
Can someone give me ideas for writing an essay about I want to be....
i don't want the whole thing I just need ideas.
Thank You.
Answer:
I WANT TO BE...
-A STRONG PERSON/ AND WHY
-KIND TO OTHERS
-A DOCTOR/WHY
Explanation:
Answer:
Sure
Doctor, Vet, Firefighter, Lawyer, Chef, Teacher, etc....
Explanation:
Essay has to have a hook so like for example if you want to be a doctor. Start the essay with someone being raced to the hospital. Then you can have your beginning about What profession you chose, What do you do in the profession, how much you make.
2nd part can be about people you know who are in this profession, how this profession benefits you or the community, if you have to go to college or not.
3rd part can simply be the reason why you want to pursue this profession so bad, and what skills you need to be successful.
Hope this helps!!
Read the excerpt from “Sea Fever” by John Masefield.
To the gull’s way and the whale’s way where the wind’s like a whetted knife;
Which sound device is most notable in the excerpt?
alliteration
assonance
onomatopoeia
rhyme
Answer:
A. Alliteration, not sure if its correct:/
Explanation:
what are the ADJECTIVES in this sentence below:
The hero in his adventure story is named Gregory.
adventure, hero?, that's it.
PLS HELPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
why can it be effective to end a story earlier than the reader expects?
A.)this leaves readers without enough clues to determine what happends
B.)this asks readers to refer to outside sources to explain the story
C.)this allows readers to draw their own conclusions about what happends
D.)this offers readers a simple explanation of the events in the story
Answer:
I believe the answer is C
How is the planning stage of Frankenstein's experiments with life and death and his plans to create a living person described? What changes take place in Frankenstein during this time and what are his reflections about the changes?
This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.
Read Frankenstein , by Mary Shelley
How is the planning stage of Frankenstein's experiments with life and death and his plans to create a living person described? What changes take place in Frankenstein during this time and what are his reflections about the changes?
Answer:
Frankenstein spends years dedicated entirely to the study of natural philosophy and chemistry, to finally decide to focus on the origins of human life and death, ideas that lead them to conceive his creature.
Explanation:
In this process, he becomes more and more isolated and obsessed, to the point of becoming ill. However, his commitment to his work only grows as well as his excitement, and he plans to resolve his personal issues only once his task has finished.
"It is better to think before we work than to repent."Justify.
Answer:
Explanation:
It is better to think before we work because then, later on, we will not have so many things to regret. if you just act and never think, you will regret many things and no one will like you.
write a response to this "One of the greatest things you have in life is that no one has the authority to tell you what you want to be. You’re the one who’ll decide what you want to be. Respect yourself and respect the integrity of others as well. The greatest thing you have is your self-image, a positive opinion of yourself. You must never let anyone take it from you.” – Jaime Escalante
Choose a different word from those you selected to study in this unit and explain where you have heard it used previously. Write the sentence
you heard with the vocabulary word in it and include who used the word and when it was used. Use proper grammar and spelling. (10 points)
Answer:
Entitled. I have heard my mother use this word previously in a conversation.
Henry is entitled to a stimulus check, he needs the money to help pay off his bills.
In your own words, describe your favourite actor/actress
Answer:
Ummm I have many some of them are Peter Kinveskie, Oliver Queen, Scarlett off of avengers of course lol ummm spider man just a whole bunch
Explanation:
They are all super kind sweet fierce brave good acting lol but yea bye! ;)
which of the following words best describe the speaker in the poem annabel lee?
a. loyal
b. worried
c. defeated
d. passive
Answer:
A. Loyal
Explanation:
define life. cus i dont know
Answer:
Life sucks in my opinion but heres what it "really means"
Explanation:
Physiological definitions of life are popular. Life is defined as any system capable of performing functions such as eating, metabolizing, excreting, breathing, moving, growing, reproducing, and responding to external stimuli
Need help. Hint at bottom of page.
Answer: Nothing
Explanation: That is my answer looked it up and it's nothing
Answer:
perhaps its no one
Explanation:
because it has example and the hint is the beginning of no
What are the rules concerning people who can't attend the lottery “ the lottery ”
Answer:
that their husband will take their draw for them. they are banished from the lottery, unless you were in the woman’s case (i forget her name) where she had decided to arrive late and instead faced a public stoning to death. they’re meant to not join the community at the gathering unless they arrive on time.
Explanation:
i read that story and did an essay.
Michael scanned his clean room one last time before he left remembering how his mother always called him fastidious?
Answer:
Fastidious means concerned about accuracy and detail.
Explanation:
"fas·tid·i·ous
/faˈstidēəs/
adjective
very attentive to and concerned about accuracy and detail.
"he chooses his words with fastidious care""
Michael scanned his clean room one last time before he left remembering his mother always called him fastidious because the one who is fastidious that means the person is concerned about accuracy and detail.
What is the meaning of the term “accuracy”?Two ways to quantify observational error are accuracy and precision. Precision is the degree to which a collection of measures is congruent with its true value.
Accuracy is the degree to which measurements are congruent with one another. Therefore, precision can be thought of as a description of random errors or as a gauge of statistical variability.
The degree to which a measurement is accurate to its true value is called accuracy. The degree of precision is the consistency of the findings of repeated measurements made in identical circumstances.
The degree to which a measured quantity value and a measurand's actual quantity value correspond is known as measurement accuracy.
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what is the definition of a lacking nervous system
回答: 正直わからない
説明: 私たちは愛する見知らぬ人ではありません
あなたはルールを知っています、そして私もそうです
完全なコミットメントは私が考えていることです
あなたは他の人からこれを取得しないでしょう
気分を伝えたいだけです
お奨めはあなたに理解させる
決してあなたをあきらめるつもりはない、決してあなたを失望させるつもりはない
走り回ってあなたを捨てるつもりはない
泣かせたり、さよならを言ったりしないでください
嘘をついてあなたを傷つけることは決してない
私たちは長い間お互いを知っていました
あなたの心は痛んでいますが、あなたはそれを言うには恥ずかしがり屋です
内部では、私たち二人は何が起こっているのかを知っています
私たちはゲームを知っていて、それをプレイするつもりです
そして、あなたが私にどのように感じているか尋ねれば
あなたが盲目すぎて見ることができないと私に言わないでください
決してあなたをあきらめるつもりはない、決してあなたを失望させるつもりはない
走り回ってあなたを捨てるつもりはない
泣かせたり、さよならを言ったりしないでください
嘘をついてあなたを傷つけることは決してない
決してあなたをあきらめるつもりはない、決してあなたを失望させるつもりはない
走り回ってあなたを捨てるつもりはない
泣かせたり、さよならを言ったりしないでください
嘘をついてあなたを傷つけることは決してない
（ああ、あきらめて）
（ああ、あきらめて）
（ああ）決して与えるつもりはない、決して与えるつもりはない（あなたをあきらめる）
（ああ）決して与えるつもりはない、決して与えるつもりはない（あなたをあきらめる）
私たちは長い間お互いを知っていました
あなたの心は痛んでいますが、あなたはそれを言うには恥ずかしがり屋です
内部では、私たち二人は何が起こっているのかを知っています
私たちはゲームを知っていて、それをプレイするつもりです
気分を伝えたいだけです
お奨めはあなたに理解させる
決してあなたをあきらめるつもりはない、決してあなたを失望させるつもりはない
走り回ってあなたを捨てるつもりはない
泣かせたり、さよならを言ったりしないでください
嘘をついてあなたを傷つけることは決してない
決してあなたをあきらめるつもりはない、決してあなたを失望させるつもりはない
走り回ってあなたを捨てるつもりはない
泣かせたり、さよならを言ったりしないでください
嘘をついてあなたを傷つけることは決してない
決してあなたをあきらめるつもりはない、決してあなたを失望させるつもりはない
走り回ってあなたを捨てるつもりはない
泣かせたり、さよならを言ったりしないでください
嘘をついてあなたを傷つけることは決してない™
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im writting a sonnet and I need help to figure out the difference between stressed and unstressed syllables because i dont really get it.
Answer:
A stressed syllable is the part of a word that you say with greater emphasis than the other syllables. Alternatively, an unstressed syllable is a part of a word that you say with less emphasis than the stressed syllable(s). However, you don't emphasize or deemphasize syllables using volume; instead, you use pitch.
Explanation:
Whats another good word for shouting????
Answer: Hollering, screaming, yelling
Explanation: These are a few off the top of my head. Sorry if it wasn't enough
NEED HELP NOW. I WILL BRAINLIEST.
Answer:
I think it's B
Explanation:
I read this last year, I'm not too sure about the WHOLE timeline, but I'm pretty sure that simon gets lost and that he sees the soldiers body, he gets scared and then runs away, only to be beaten to a pulp by the rest of the rabid boys. We don't find out that it was a sodier until the next morning.
What is the difference between
a mixer, and a blender (One difference only). Who is gonna answer this question? Free brainliest
Answer:
easy
Explanation:
a mixer mixes things and well a blender blends things
this dude above me spittin facts… I would say “rn” but I’m a year late ._.
There are many characters that affect Macbeth’s desire for power, however, Macduff is NOT the one that affects Macbeth’s desire in Shakespeare’s play. TRUE or FALSE?
Answer: It’s true
Explanation:
Who is your favorite character from Greys Anatomy? Must explain to get a brainly. Good luck!!!
Answer:
Meredith Grey / Ellen Pompeo
Explanation:
My favorite character is Meredith Grey since she is has gone through so much and I can relate to her and that she is the lead surgeon and she tries her best and hardest to save all of her patients.
Answer:
Christina
Explanation:
I like her because she is fierce. She never lets something get in the way of her being good at work. She has a sweet heart but at the same time shes never afraid to tell someone the truth.
A Paragraph about dedication
How many clauses are in the sentence?
Martin Luther King, Jr.'s speech is famous for good reason; it inspires people.
A
One independent clause
B
Two independent clauses separated with a semicolon
C
Two independent clauses separated with a comma and a coordinating conjunction
D
An independent clause and a dependent clause separated by a subordinating conjunction
B ) Two independent clauses separated with a semicolon
Answer:
B) Two independent clauses separated with a semicolon.
Explanation:
What does the line "killed herself one winter's night and lies
buried at some cross-roads where the omnibuses now stop
outside the Elephant and Castle" convey about the author's
view of how society regards a woman's legacy? (Paragraph 6)
Answer:
I believe it is B.
Explanation:
They buried the woman at some random intersection
The Case of the Missing Script Where should you go next
Answer:y
Explanation:
A script is a small piece of program that can add interactivity to your website.
What is the meaning of Script?An existing system's features can be modified, automated, and customized using a scripting language, also known as a scripting language. Scripting languages are typically not compiled but rather interpreted at runtime.
A script is a brief piece of software that can make your website more interactive. A script could, for instance, produce a pop-up alert box message or offer a dropdown selection. VBScript or JavaScript could be used for this script.
The two don't necessarily mean the same thing, despite the common misconception that they do. Simply explained, scripting allows you to control a program that was built through coding, whereas coding allows you to construct programs on your own.
Almost every script you could ever need or want is available in one convenient location with Simple Scripts, making it easy for you to use it whenever you need it.
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restate the Claim one state¨The vehicle in Iceworld Revenge had different masses; in Claire’s test, the vehicles had the same mass. plz and thank you god bless whoever answers it right and his family.
Explanation:
THIS INDICATES THE VEHICLES EXPERIENCED DIFFERENT CHANGES IN VELOCITY FROM THE COLLISION. IN A COLLISION, BOTH OBJECTS EXPERIENCE THE SAME STRENGTH FORCE, BUT IN OPPOSITEDIRECTIONS
Who is telling the story?
Click here to read the passage "That Tiny Tubman Woman" to answer the question.
an unnamed narrator
Samuel
an unnamed speaker
Minty
Find the word that acts as either a predicate noun or predicate adjective in the sentence. Then tell which of the two it is.
This book is interesting. In the sentence to the left, the word___ is a predicate___.
A.interesting A.noun
B.book B.adjective
C.this
D.is
Answer:
I am literally stuck on the same question and cant seem to figure it out but I think it is either a or b
Explanation:
In the sentence "This book is interesting", the word "interesting" is a predicate adjective.A predicate adjective is a type of subject complement that is linked to the subject by a linking verb (such as "is," "was," "were," etc.) and describes or modifies the subject.The predicate adjective is always an adjective.